Explanation-why our school is special

GOAL:Contractions

I enjoyed the writing because writing is my favorite subject at school.

I found it difficult to remember my ideas.

1.Today I'm going to explain to you why Paroa school is the best school in Greymouth.

My main reason is because Paroa school has lots of things to do like the swimming pool,field,x2 playgrounds,court,sandpit,library.  On the field you can play soccer,ripper rugby,touch,court games and lots of other things.  The swimming pool is handy for swimming sports and it’s awesome how you can go there in the summer holidays.The sandpit is a nice place to go when you are feeling angry or sad so you can crush the sand.The court is a place where you can play basketball, netball, farmer farmer and so on.  Hayley does the hot fresh lunches and gets the subway and a fact is that you can not get yogurt anymore at subway. The x2 playgrounds is so the little kids don’t get hurt.Another reason is that the teachers support and help the kids in their class and they also give us feedback so we can be BTB so we can improve our work.  The teachers also help with reading,writing and maths. They’re really nice to everyone so the can encourage people to be BTB!   BTB means Better Than Before

Also Paroa school is where there are strong friendships that last a long time. Explain

See what i mean by starting paroa school.

By Holly

To be BTB I could try and use more contractions

Camp

WALT:use capital letters for the names of people and places.

On Thursday Room 5 went to camp in the glaciers so we came to school and had a meeting and went on our way.

First we had a quick stop at Ross and there was a fake jail and the man inside was just a dummy and his fingers were cut off they had bandages all around them he was really creepy he had a piece of wheat in his mouth also we went to Okarito and did a walk.

Then we went to Franz for a walk and it was so so so long it was 3 hours an hour and a half each way it was so tiring.

Next we drove to Fox glacier on the way we had to stop so max could to the toilet when max was going mum got me a packet of chips they were chicken flavour and we hit the road on our way again.After that we went to the lodge in fox glacier and we had dinner it was burger, then came the DISCO! It was so cool we played musical pillows and musical statues.Finally we had a game morning on Friday we played where's Pete the cat and a comp to see who could make a pyramid with paper cups without our hands we had to use a rubber band and string first my group came third and then we came first by a cup.For the first time in my life I felt happy to be back from camp because it was a big camp.

By Holly.

Room 5 camp

WALT:share our camp experiences.

I enjoyed doing the word art on my poster.

I found it challenging to remember what happened.

To make my work BTB, I need to make sure it makes sense.

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Olympic Moment in Time

                                                                                   
WALT: Describe a moment in time in detail.

Peter Burling and I won a gold in the men’s rowing it felt really exciting we crossed over first wow and we were holding on with when1 hand and waving to the crowd going completely wild.

We were speeding like a comet going for the gold medal today.

It felt amazing and emotional to win the gold medal at the 2016 Rio Olympics.

I wondered how people predicted that we would

win a gold medal in the men’s sailing?

I felt confused because I didn’t really believe that we would get a gold medal, until we did.

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