Explanation-why our school is special

GOAL:Contractions

I enjoyed the writing because writing is my favorite subject at school.

I found it difficult to remember my ideas.

1.Today I'm going to explain to you why Paroa school is the best school in Greymouth.

My main reason is because Paroa school has lots of things to do like the swimming pool,field,x2 playgrounds,court,sandpit,library.  On the field you can play soccer,ripper rugby,touch,court games and lots of other things.  The swimming pool is handy for swimming sports and it’s awesome how you can go there in the summer holidays.The sandpit is a nice place to go when you are feeling angry or sad so you can crush the sand.The court is a place where you can play basketball, netball, farmer farmer and so on.  Hayley does the hot fresh lunches and gets the subway and a fact is that you can not get yogurt anymore at subway. The x2 playgrounds is so the little kids don’t get hurt.Another reason is that the teachers support and help the kids in their class and they also give us feedback so we can be BTB so we can improve our work.  The teachers also help with reading,writing and maths. They’re really nice to everyone so the can encourage people to be BTB!   BTB means Better Than Before

Also Paroa school is where there are strong friendships that last a long time. Explain

See what i mean by starting paroa school.

By Holly

To be BTB I could try and use more contractions