Tuesday 16 August 2016

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3 comments:

  1. Hi Holly love your all about me poster.
    I like the way you talked about your family.
    Next time you could put your head straight in the
    photo.
    Thanks:)

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  2. Hi Holly
    I like how you put I hope you enjoy my blog at the end,
    Your next step is to use capital I because everyone is special,Also
    make your eyeballs look at the little circle at the top of your computer.
    Thanks,Abbie :)

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  3. Hi Holly! It's Miro here. I love how you took a photo of yourself. Next time, you could put some more capitals and puncuation in. Thanks!

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